FIREBIRD #5 (monthly Asian superheroine comic strip)

[Ashton09]

http://i733.photobucket.com/albums/ww340/dashton09/FIREBIRD5.jpg

hello all,
my name is Ashton and I'm just a comic fan who likes to draw this crazy comic strip for fun. in the past I've been posting it on the laundry room for my kids to read but now I've decided to expand its exposure, not because I think its so great but just because its kind of fun to have an audience.
any comments, good or bad, are welcome~ its a work in progress so I don't mind any critiques at all and I'd like to make it better. Right now this story line is a homage to the Asian horror movies- Ring and Dark Water.

hope you enjoy~


“FIREBIRD” current episode (larger version)
http://www.flickr.com/photos/36664072@N03/3413564805/sizes/l/

[christianlooney]

god i hope you are like 8yrs old man.......that's horrible!

[Capital G]

That's definitely not "constructive" criticism. Douche.

In the first little box, I like how you put a real person's face in it. I think it would be gnarly if you did that for everyone in the strip. Give it a different look than other comics.

This is ABates, I didn't feel like logging out of my boyfriend's TF account.

[Ashton09]

That's definitely not "constructive" criticism. Douche.

In the first little box, I like how you put a real person's face in it. I think it would be gnarly if you did that for everyone in the strip. Give it a different look than other comics.

This is ABates, I didn't feel like logging out of my boyfriend's TF account.

Thanks ABates, I really appreciate your comments. That was actually my wife who allowed me to use her picture in that post. I like your idea of alternating characters in the title logo too. And thanks for checking out my comic strip~

plus in regards to the prior post there are always going to be flamers here and there along the way~ can't please every one all the time ;)